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for Humanity

by QueenB

person saxman66
schedule April 6, 2019 at 12:00 AM

  Hi, Interesting story but is there a formatting problem?  Chapter's 12 & 13 seem to be identical while chapter 14 looks like somethings missing.  Has C13 being replaced by a copy of c12 in some way?

  Otherwise a good story and enjoyed reading it. :)

 

person shahid
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the nc17 was nice. although u could have gone with a little more detail.