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May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It?s a great and wonderful story, please continue soon
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I have a feeling that the spell isn't going to go so well. You wrote the LA part amazingly well. You caught the emotions and wrote them like very few have been able to. And that includes Joss and Co. Can't wait for more.
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7 Well, I don't see Connor being quite this emotional or sentimental but I'll take it over the dreck of AtS season four.
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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!! I'm addicted to your stories and waiting desperately for a new chapter!
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April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous part, I must say. I really like the way Buffy is being stubborn about things, normally ics tcs that would frustrate me but for some reason, I like it. Though sometimes I do wanna try and smack her. Angel seems to be really trying. Oh well I can't wait to see what happens when and if Giles calls. Will Angel come back to Sunny-D????
Please Update this one again soon!
Please Update this one again soon!
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April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey DR, I didn't tell you how much I loved the little internal dialogue going through Willow's, Giles' and Xander's heads on the various nudity they had to witness: Willow ogling Buffy's nipples, Giles stupefied at Angel's...proportions and Xander once again noting what a gorgeouy Auy Angel is. Yowzah! Funny stuff.:D I'm looking forward to more Scooby naughtiness.
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April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I find it very believable that Buffy would seek to bury her turmoil by focusing on her slaying and duty. Her insistence on training (which she used to always try to get out of when she had a life) kind of reminds me of her maniacal approach towards the Thanksgiving dinner. I also liked the way she echoed the "morning after" scene with Angelus when she was trying to push him away. Not exactly "Wishverse Buffy" but, IMHO, certainly in character.
Hope to see you continue this. Perhaps you could find a reason to send Buffy back to LA - there's no immediate reason that you'd have to - especially as long as she's so focused on re-learning Sunnydale - but it'd like to see it.
Also - I do like the way Buffy's discovery that she can still fight gives her purpose while at the same time also reminding her of her underlying issues. Good job maintaining the angst even when you gave Buffy and Angel a curse-free love scene.
Hope to see you continue this. Perhaps you could find a reason to send Buffy back to LA - there's no immediate reason that you'd have to - especially as long as she's so focused on re-learning Sunnydale - but it'd like to see it.
Also - I do like the way Buffy's discovery that she can still fight gives her purpose while at the same time also reminding her of her underlying issues. Good job maintaining the angst even when you gave Buffy and Angel a curse-free love scene.
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April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6 I am so glad to see the continuation of this story! Angel is being his broody best and Buffy is being typically stubborn. I was hoping for more sympathy from Xander, though. This nastiest towards Angel is something he should have outgrown a long time ago.
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April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5 This is a wonderfully agst-ridden chapter. You manage to take all the elements--humor, embarrassment, self loathing and really hot sex--and tie them up in one beautiful package. I'm eagerly looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
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April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good part. I'm loving this fiction. You wrote the emotions in this part *so* well. Please write more soon.