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by DarkRhiannon

person QueenB
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7 The website indicates that this was updated in 2004. But I have a printout that dates from 2003. So evidently you made some changes in it without adding any subsequent chapters.

I was riveted from this story from the first chapter. The idea of Slayers dying young is nothing new; that comes with the job. But being maimed for life is whole new territory and you mined the subject with exquisite precision.

I picked up your unfinished story from a pile of other such WIPs and re-read it just last night; it was as wonderful as I remember. But I'm hoping that you finish it. It's a faint hope after all these years but one I cling to for a tale as good as this. (It's also a favorite because it has no Spike but that's a minor reason.)

Try finishing it if you can. Your other fans are clearly hoping that you will.
person frosty600
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow i totally love this story i hope that you can update soon :D
person Jags
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was good. cordy can be such a dosy bint. i wonder what would happen if angelus came out to play? you know since angel(us) marked buffy as mate i wonder if angelus would react to her differently with that in mind? can't wait to see more
person QueenB
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was last updated over 3 years ago. Are you ever going to finish it? I'm still wondering how Angel is going to deal with Buffy's hostility and whether or not they can make a life together. :(
person QueenB
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7 DR, I hate to be a nag. But, screw it, I'm going to nag. When are you going to continue this story? Your faithful reader has been waiting a dog's age just for a new chapter but I've yet to see one. I love this story. It's one of my favorite B/A fanfics and you're letting your readers down by not providing a continuation. If you have the complete story posted elsewhere, just let me know and I'll go there to read it. (You see, this is why I NEVER post WIPs; it's so unfair to the readers.)
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Queen Boadicea
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7 Rhiannon, I realize that RL has its claims on people and I've no idea what your personal situation is. But this is a fine B/A story that has been languishing unfinished for ages. When are you going to finish it? Are you ever going to finish it? BtVS and Angel: The Series are long over. But now that David Boreanaz has a new series coming up this month, I've experienced a renewed interest in the Angel character that makes me wish great fanfics like this would come to some satisfactory conclusion. It's not that I ever lost sight of this story (it's among the fics listed on one of my Yahoo! groups, after all) but I was hoping you'd finish before now. Why not conclude this particular story of yours, at least? There are still a lot of diehard B/A fans out there; don't forget about us. Pwwwweeeease?
person mai
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im loving this. Any updates soon?
person bats
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. i love your story. please keep updating!
person Siren of Hell
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ciao
Luv the story... as i have for ohhhhhh about a year or so!
Please, I'm begging you here! Update!!!
This fic... any of your other fics! I'm not picky!
Ur an awesome writer so please please update something!!!