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Good grief!! So much angst, sorrow and guilt. I hope Buffy finds something to do to fill her time. I'm a lousy housewife but I can cook and drive. Pinning everything on one other person is stupid and unfair the the beloved. More please.

At last a crack in the stone wall. I'm glad that she was there to see it. Maybe now she can also understand a bit of Xander's obsessiveness about Will. Good chapter.

William's continued relationship with Xander isn't confusing to the reader, but he should explain it to Buffy. They're both insecure and keep avoiding issues rather than confronting them, that's disasterous in a relationship. The characters continue to evolve, but the marriage isn't getting stronger. The shadow of Drusilla is well realized, and the back stabbing community Buffy is forced into is also nicely detailed. I'm looking forward to more of this engaging, erotic story.

What is Buffy going to do? She does need to get a life pretty soon. Otherwise she has no leverage. More soon.

Can't wait to see Spike untangle himself. More please.

good to see that Buffy and Spike are trying to fix some of the damage Xander created. It will only be a temporary fix if Xander and Cordelia get another chance to mess things up for Spuffy. More please.

WOW!!! Poor (William) his insecurities were really showing at the end of that chapter, (maybe a little counseling might help). Things are beginning to look quite deep, there's so much going on...Xander and Cordy acting in such a sly and underhanded manner...the younger girl, older man dynamic between Spike 'n' Buffy (which is always fraught with problems and conflict as the young girl grows into the woman she will, or should become, that's if the older man doesn't try to mould her into what he wants her to be) and Spike/Williams first marriage is hanging over the couple, making any real atempts at a real marriage damn near impossible (poor Buffy, poor Spike) and it looks as if now Buffy might just be beginning to suspect that Spike could've been involved in Dru's death...GOD I LOVE this story. Miss. Marple move aside...enter Mrs.Muir...more soon...PLEASE.

You're really good with the cliff hangers. I'd love to read more.

Uh oh! Trouble in LA. She better get that journal back; get Dru's stuff to charity; and watch her back with Xander and Cordelia. They are NOT her friends and probably never will be. I hope Spike's movie deal is good. More please.

The plot thickens...can't wait to read more...Buffy's so gonna get found out! And she's not gonna like what she finds...denfinitely can't wait for more of that.
Thanks for the e-mail by the way, i'm glad you liked my review and just so you know...you keep writing i'll keep reviewing.