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for Nocturnal Bravura

by SShine

person lolita Diva
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an absolutely amazing story, it has so many emotions and is an absolute joy to read. I can't wait for more.
person becky
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
incredible story i cant wait for book 2!
person becky
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another uber excellent chapter! cant wait to read more of this great story!
person becky
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow she was a bitch! i hope doris' death was very painful!! poor dawnie! please let buffy get her help and become a non crazy vamp
person JADE
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES LOVE BUFFY AND SPIKE! its tough to find really good and unique Buffy Spike fanfiction. personally i love spike i really dont mind william all that much but BUFFY SPIKE all the way. i never read any other couples. when u said buffy wiliam i hope u ment more like a frendship thing. Cause its a vamp mate like forever. God i hope so. LOVE THE STORY THE UTTER DEVOTION OF BUFFY SPIKE IS SO SO. . . HUH I DONT HAVE WORDS FOR IT IT JDT SO GOOD!!!!
person becky
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter! great job!
person nat
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Very original. I can't wait for more!
person becky
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well despite what others say, i love your flashbacks and your story in general great job and take your time just so its interesting like so far:D
person lolita
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well whoever said that this story is too long and that you are dragging it out is an idiot and obviously only interested in reading PWP's, this is a fantastic story and I am loving it, it has made me smile, laugh, cry the lot, i have felt truly drawn into it and I like the darkness aspect to it too, I have one query though, you said that there would be some Buffy/William later on and just to me I don't think that it would go somehow, I would have to see how you would introduce it because so far it seems that Buffy and William have a strong friendship and there is some unrequited love on his side, but Buffy seems totally devoted to Spike, and vice versa, there feelings for each other are just so raw and powerful and at the moment i think that it would be a little dissapointing to see her end up with Will. But hey that's just my opinion and I may be wrong, ;-)
Anyhoo sorry to ramble on a bit there, hope to see more from you soon.

Lolita
person kiss_me
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heya! i lurrrved this whole fic :D personally i don't think this dragged on at all, i wouldnt mind it being in one go-- but hey, its your fic! i luv the Druness of Buffy and then how shes Lizzy and wow! Spike and William-- :D double the hotness! *claps* next book soon*