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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good!!! please update soon....
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic so far...I am interested to see where it goes. Please update soon!
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The chapters could do with being longer....that should be seen as a compliment though, cos I'm eager to read more and find out where you're gonna go with it.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, but you might want to try reformatting it so that it's easier to read (and not in such a huge block)
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think this story can get pretty good...definately has potential...i hope u continue it
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think u are off to a good start & I look forward to reading more. I think u have a lot of material to work w/ from the way u started the fic. Update sonn-look forward to it.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it, its a good start. Paragraphing would be good though.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good start! next time could you please put some empty space between paragraphs
because it's quite hard to read small text if it's written without division into paragraphs...
please update soon...;D
because it's quite hard to read small text if it's written without division into paragraphs...
please update soon...;D