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for One Special Night

by bromfieldhall

person spikestheman
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow batman!!!!!!!Can this have anymore angst, PLease tell me they are going to stop anylising every detail and finally get it on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I cant wait for the next chapter Katrina keep up the good work, but reward us with some spuffy SOON!!!!!!!!
person Kimber
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To be honest 25 percent of me is liking the angst.....75 percent is saying......gone on too long....Spike/William is too curious of a man, he'd have brought up the subject of Elizabeth, if Rupert had not long before now......If he was such good friends with Rupert he would have known he had more then one niece. If Rupert had noticed a spark of something between them, I would imagine he'd been doing little things about it to encourage it. Will be interesting when he finds out how deep her lie does go how her reacts, especially at the potential embarrassing moments I can envision happening to him because of it.......
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please.
person Renee\'
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO! Damn it- couldn't Giles use NAMES and not PRONOUNS! Damn- I thought he'd bust up Buffy's story for sure! GRRRRR. Gotta admit, I've read this sotry on jsut about every site I've seen it on. I'm dying here! When will one of them figure it out!

P.S.- you've written this rather well. You amke it rather believable, by the stuff yoiu leave out, that one doesn't fully get what they other is takling about. I really do enjoy youre storry andf am anxiously awaiting more it. But, please, don't feel pressured. Too many writers feel pressured to do too much, get frustrated, and quit their stories. Dont' be one- I wanna see them finally get together! And please, for the love of it all, give one of them a clue... pelase? :)

Also, sorry about any spelling errors, I'm just rather excited by the new chapter and this is my first time reviewing the story.
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please
person pixiecorn
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on dont leave us hanging here plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update real soon

that chapter was reall;y good i hope there will be more spuffy to come
person shelly
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great! i love this story please update sooon!!
person Kimber
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm

Buffy is starting to get on my nerves. Her lies is what's keeps him saying bad things but truthful things in his eyes. Can she be come out and tell the man the truth at some point here soon......, Nah, then were would all the beloved angst be that makes the story go on and on and on....LOL! Don't leave us hanging too long on the lovely little cliff hanger.....
person kiss_me
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh! cliffyhangy! :D more soon x