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by Abbyland

person sobad
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD..........Can she already tell him she loves him. Yes I believe she has fallen IN LOVE with this evil man. Well, not anymore can we forgive him I mean can Buffy forgive him and move on. Have babies, live happy lives with this fine ass man. Can I get my happy B/A ending cuz we're sure are'nt goin' get in the ATS. Loving this story where ever you take us. sobad
person sobad
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD..........Can she already tell him she loves him. Yes I believe she has fallen IN LOVE with this evil man. Well, not anymore can we forgive him I mean can Buffy forgive him and move on. Have babies, live happy lives with this fine ass man. Can I get my happy B/A ending cuz we're sure are'nt goin' get in the ATS. Loving this story where ever you take us. sobad
person Kate
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I 'm writing those line because I never read something so good. I mean Ther's always something happening to the character. Continue your fiction if people are not giving you good feedback because they d'ont like it remeber that I do. I'm comming on this site only to read your fiction.

Kate
person becky
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what an exciting chapter! i know alot of people will hate the end of this chapter i love it! there is just something about buffy and angel together that gets to me. even when its au or hes evil it still feels right to me destined to be although i dont think youll let them end up together in this one. please update soon cuz im eagerly awaiting it!:)
person pheonix_23
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! What a way to keep us all hanging!! Great plot twist. I like how Buffy is confused about her feelings towards Angelus. It's like she wants to give in but doesn't or can't. I was kind of weary about Angelus being so...Angel-like but it fits well with your story. The whole deal with Angelus keeping a password on his computer and phone was good because it shows that he knows Buffy will always be trying to escape. But with Buff being pregnant now...I don't know how you're going to take this. You better post another chapter SOON otherwise I'll go CRAZY with speculation!!!!!

Sonya
person Abbyland
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your reviews. You know I debated back and forth about how "Angel-like" Angelus should get in this fic because I do worry that he is getting too wussy but at the same time, I think what made me go with it was that, for this fic at least, he can't be a brute if he wants to get Buffy. I kept thinking back to his relationship with Cordy and although I didn't elaborate on it too much, at one point Cordelia was in love with him. Now granted their relationship wasn't very good towards the end, they were on and off for several years and it ended quite violently but I think that at least in the beginning, he would have been gentle and sweet and what not. Prior to her rape, Cordy had never seen Angel violent before but rather she got a glimpse of this softer side and fallen in love. Unfortunately his coldness and hatred consumed him and she became just another woman to him and later, a target. Also, as part of the show's canon, I tend to think of Angelus' interaction with Darla. All violent, kinky demon stuff aside, imo he seemed to enjoy pleasing her, and she him. They were consorts. So I guess I am sort of going off of that, both what I took from him and Darla and what I imagine his relationship with Cordy would have started out as. The only difference with Buffy being it's not calculating and he really wants her. But yeah, as fun as writing Angelus is, keeping him closer to that personality wouldn't work in this fic.
person Penny
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the twist at the end. You got me! I didn't see that coming at all. Great story as usual. Stick to your guns girl. You know your own story best. It's a pleasure to read.
person Destiny
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAS AAS AMAZING AND EXOCTIC >>> MORE PlZZ
person sobad
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally loving this story. The rape was kinda of hard because I knew he was going to fall in love with her and the regret it. I know others' are going to have of a problem with it at first I've indicated that she should'nt fall for him after he raped her but then as I read each chapter I'm really feeling so sorry for him., how much he's changing. This last 2 this parts is some really good writing., I really do want him with Buffy but after ing ing into your comments it probably not going to happen., so whatever happens. I'll deal with the outcome. But your writing is very intensed at times, it so surreal. You truly have a style of writing that I truly love. So keep them updated coming. sobad
person newworldorder
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the best AU Buffy fics ever written.

I can't wait to see how it ends.