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May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, though very dark, disturbing, and altogether cringe-worthy. It fits with your characterization of Angelus though, so bravo! I now want Buffy to beat the h*ll out of Angelus more than ever.
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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better! Now that Angelus is scott free and taken off with Buffy he doesn't have to play by any rules, does he? Now he can indulge himself in Buffy's body in any way he wants, some ways I expect Buffy never could have imagined. There's lots of things he's never tried. What intrigues me about this is the dynamic between Angelus and Buffy. He's messing with her psyche even more than her body, yet she's still strong and resists him every time, even though she's gonna lose more and more with eached forced orgasm - I love this. You're a very intelligent writer. Plus, you write great sex scenes between them.
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AS always fantastic chapter, I've read it a few days ago but only now had the chance to review it. I'm still checking everyday for chapter 10 and for Buffy to wake up. I hope that he'll run away with her, that Cordy will be left behind with Dawn and that Buffy will realize that he had taken her away forever...please please pretty please?
Anyway go on with it, great fic...
Eve
Anyway go on with it, great fic...
Eve
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May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lol how very clever of you. Mme tme think, ...aw... even if he is a psycho, he's cute. And then he's goin in for cordy. DIE MOTHERFUKCER DIE!!! I swear I hope Buffy ties him up, chains him to a stum p post in her basement and keeps him there, with a small blanket and feeding him frozen foods and milk to keep him alive... Yup, I AM fucked up.
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May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
P.S. The chase scene was really cool.
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April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that this remains B/A. I love this story and hope that you write more soon.
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April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This continues to be a wonderful story.
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April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! But I think it's time for Angelus to take Buffy's last virginity, hopefully in a really exciting heart stopping way!
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April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just wanted to say that I LOVE this story! It's so well written! I really love this plot. Usually I don't like stories that are put in a different setting other than the show but this story is really good! I hope you continue writing this and post it ASAP!!!!
Keep up the good work!!!
Keep up the good work!!!
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April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is excellent so far. You have captured the right amount of darkness and desperation, and it works well. I wouldn't want Angelus and Buffy to fall in love here (because Angelus is too twisted to ever really love anyone and Buffy could never love someone who degr her her and then beat her sister), but I do look forward to Buffy kicking the crap out of Angelus. :)