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Great line! It reminded me of Dawns comment to Spike on how he would 'wake up on fire' if he hurt her sister.

i am fully addicted to this story now! i really hope you keep updating. sorry i haven't reviewed previous chapters, but i got so caught up that i had to keep going. i love the dawn/andrew ship, and it's so hard to find, and most of it is crap, so please keep going! this is awesome. i love how dawn likes andrew in full geek-mode, and how he's insecure about it. i love this line: "I, um, sort of wanted you to come." because it shows the supercute awkwardness that defines this relationship. i am hoping that now that buffy is gone, there will be some intense sexual tension, because that is my favorite part, even more than the sex! you rock.

Buffy is off to LA leaving our intrepid couple to their own devices. Hmm.... I am anxious to see what they make of their alone time.

Buffy's gone to LA. . . and we know what she's gonna find when she gets there. But what happens in Rome while she's away? I'm curious to find out -- and is Andrew gonna tell Dawn what he knows? I wonder how she's going to react? I love the interaction between the two of them. They're so cute. And she doesn't mind he's a geek, which is cool.

Very nice. I kinda want to know what'll happen to Buffy, but I like this storyline. Its sweet and well written. You characterizations work. Good job! More please!

I've been lurking but I wanted to encourage you to continue! I never thought i'd like this pairing but I really love the way you've written Dawn and Andrew. Dawn especially because she's having very real feelings of isolation. I also like the way you're writing Buffy because Buffy definately has a tendancy to be hypocritical, ignore Dawn, and be a bit of a bitch. I really can't wait to see what her dreams mean and I really hope that she discovers some power that makes Buffy realize that Dawn is not just some kid.

I just love Andrew. Must be the geek in me. And that DS9 episode is my second favorite episode of ALL time!! Thanks so much and can't wait for more!!

I really enjoyed this story. I hope that you continue to update it. Your Andrew is still fun but I appreciate the maturity you have added. Their relationship is very believable. Thanks.

Strangely compelling. I think I like it.

Oooh! This is the first Dawn/Andrew ff that is actually good! I love it, PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!