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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter nine I did not post each chapter as I realize you would have liked . I wanted to finish this becuase Dawn is usually left on the side lines. You kept close to canon yet giving the story its own life. Andrew and Dawn do make a good pair and this is the first time brought together. Good on you. Keep writing you bring enjoyment to the page.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was great. I liked how they are trying to respect each other. Dawn is doing well with trying to understand Andrew and what a gentelman he is trying to be good to her. I really like this fic. PLEASE keep it going ups and downs and angst and love and all that fun stuff. Keep it coming.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww how sweet movie moment and good one at that. Damn buffy with her bad timing. Grrrrrrrrrrrr great story
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO we have smoochies....yeahhhhhhhhhhh for Dawn
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah what the hell kind of name is the "the immortal" anyways. *rolls eyes*. I am really liking how you are taking this story and seeing a side of Dawn and Andrew that was not presented before.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh christ like Buffy is one to talk about boy choices. I mean unless we are talking about when she finally took to Spike,but duhhhhhhhhh Angel and Riley to big huge dorks and mistakes. I truly hope Dawn and Andrew can keep this up. Oh yeah where are the two vampires that came to call???
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh boy things could get hairy here..i am really liking this story
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmm this is interesting I will keep going. I like seeing a side of Dawn and Andrew that was never brought out. excellent.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. Unusual pairing, but refreshing. Keep up the good work!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This fic has gotten hot! I started reading this a while ago but kind of lost it after awhile. I'm glad I re-found it and I hope you're still writing it. I love how well it goes along with Daylight...But Andrew's making me a little nervous withholding the Spike info. Loved how you handled his sexuality and wrote a little back story. Uber-interesting! Thanks for writing.