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thanks for updating!! that chapter was great, i hope youll update your other stories too.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. that was the best chapter ever. i like how you wrote buffy and faith depending on one another and all that other fun stuff. i liked it and i cant wait for the next chapeter.

Ok, I'm thinking the future ain't lookin so rosy for them...*sigh* And it was all going soooooo sweet. You really conveyed the feeling of closeness between them in this chapter I think, like they're at that need to be with each other stage for more than just the sex...And I'm thinkin "yup, that's usually the point in a relationship that everything turns to shit." ...lol. Or is that just what happens to me? Ok, TMI....*chuckle* Best line ...*She knew what I was doing. I knew what I was doing. Fuck, the people on the TV probably knew what I was doing*...lol. Now that's sooo Faith. Keep the story coming cos I'm still all caught up in it n everything *wink*

that was so cute i just wanted to print the story and cuddle with it

aww this is such a cute story. please keep writing it.

What a wonderful CH-Very witty. Brillaint & quite a good sense of humor.

I just finished this. WOW! There are so many gems in this story, where do I begin? Well, for starters, You have a tremendous fluency in Buffy-ese! I could hear Eliza Dushku's Faith narrating this from sentence one. You nailed her tone and rhythm, her propensity to be a bit of a tease in the tell-all department, and her colorful descriptions DEAD-ON! "William-the-Bloody-Pain-In-My-Ass," "Taking care of my hornies," "A drunk Cordie ... is a fun Cordie," and "Note to self: Fire my internal censor. Hire a new one," are just a few examples of things that made me howl. Insinuating Faith into the Aspect of the Demon episode and the Graduation Ceremony was wonderful ... as was your nod to the whole Buffy/Spike romance when Buff becomes the dark heroine with the line, "You don't need me -- You need to feel." Incredible. You've definitely got the whole down-on-the-love-muffin thang going on, too. There's really only one way to describe this story: Tour de Force.

This is one for the FAVES list!

BRAVO!

Really am loving this story. It's nice to see a sweet side to Faith and a naughty side to Buffy. I enjoyed the Buffy / Faith subtext on the show and love when I find a story that can take that and expand on it, be well written, and still have the characters voices be the same as on the show. I like the way you kept the major events from season 3 but altered them just a bit to fit into the Bufy / Faith love story dynamic, and so that Faith doesn't go bad, obviously. It's hard to do and most stories I've read seem to just re-write the season they are ficcing altogther to make things work. Please continue this, and often.

Don't know if anyones following it? Are you MAD, girl? Of course you know...so I thought I'd show a little fellow fic writer support. We can stand united in smut and all that *wink* You already know I loved that last chapter right? Just in case you forgot...I LOVED it. And I don't use that word liberally, especially where Fuffuy fics are concerned, but DAMN that was hot. Who wouldn't want to worship Eliza's...err, I mean Faith's body like that....*slips into a dream like state*...Ahem, where was I? Oh yeah, even though I think I can see angst on the horizon, this fic is my fave of yours, and one of my faves I'm following at the min. I think there are only about 4 or 5 others, so feel honered...*grin* Ok, gonna shut up now and hope you continue this above ALL else....

You know what I love about your sex scenes, beyond the obvious advantages of them being hot, hot, hot? Well, it'd have to be the way they're long, but not overdone. They have stamina, just like the Slayers. I think I need to learn how to do that. Hmm. Today, you are my muse.