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for Touch the Sun

by Electra126

person ally
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loves it
person bkitty
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked chapter, well worth the wait.

And this bit:
"Anyhow, I?m off-topic again. Dude, snap your fingers in front of my face or something next time I do that." juat had me laughing out loud.

I loved the Anya bits too, especially the way Faith lures her upstairs with an offer to look at some money.

person lele angel03
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
son of a bitch damn damn damn.....please continue i liked that very much ;)
person Dylan
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I really felt for Faith. Felt the hold off just before the drop of Buffy's "but" speech...Nicely done. This is developing into a great epic type fic, that will keep me tangled up in it and wanting more every chapter.
person Queen Zulu
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, you win again! I think it's just more evidence of your general awesomeness. But my chapter's really hard! Dammit.

Well, to the praise, then!

With your usual finesse, you've managed to combine humour, angst, fluff, and love all into one delicate dance of incredible writing. Burning toast, Anya's talk of sexcapades, the "aww!" of the kitchen moment...it's all so magical. And you're headed for Plotsville at Mach 15. That's what I like to see! And, like Dylan said on-list, I have confidence in your ability to pull back from the angst when the time is right. As someone who has lusted futilely for my straight friends, I'm really feeling Faith's pain here. Whoa, man. You rock.
person allie
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mor more more more. please update sooon. i want to find out what happens with faith and buffy and especially faith. i love this story from the beginning
person Nikki
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to give you some feedback that you always ask for. First let me point out I was rather excited to see your story had been updated. If there's one thing I can't get enough of, it's gotta be well written femslash. I love the way you portray Faith as well, how she corrects herself from saying she fucked Buffy to she made love to her. It's little things like that in your work that makes the entire thing come together in an incredible masterpiece. So I don't know if other people have written feedback for you, but if they haven't shame on them. This is one girl who is looking forward to more of your writing. Thanks for taking your time to read this and also to write the stories.
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww thats sad for faith. damn buffy. jk but great story keep going with it
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really happy to see an update. This is a great story and I'm hoping the next chapter is just around the corner. Love how you've written Faith and Buffy so realistically,yet have been able to develop them further. It's a wonderfully written story,but I'm fearful all may not end well. Whatever,I'm really enjoying this. Nice job!
person Queen Zulu
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am the inspiration fairy. I sprinkle you with inspiration dust! Whoosh! More, I say! More!