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for Touch the Sun

by Electra126

person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Buffy is dating Riley to make her friends happy? That is just the flimsiest excuse I've heard. Ever. Buffy is too kind and sweet to hurt her precious friends but doesn't mind ripping Faith's heart to shreds. I guess that means Faith is not even at 'friend' level. I'm glad she realized that she is being used. Dump her and run Faith. Really not liking Buffy much, or at all.
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very happy to see this updated! Angst can't be beat,not when it's as well-written as this. Of course I hope for the eventual happy ending,but that's up to you. Please keep the updates coming.
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i LOVED it! well, not the fact that theres so much angst i almost drowned in it but it was really great, but FUCKING SAD!!!
you really got to get buffy to wake up and know for sure if she loves faith or not cause shes just a bitch right now, shes killing faith! so please,PLEASE update soon!!!
person Bkitty
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it transisted smoothly enough, but you can't leave it there. Speech, speech!
person anna
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww poor faith. more power to her for leavin though. bein someone's crutch isn't cool. buffy the dumbass is gonna go out with some borin meathead that's into her an totally forget what's faith's done for her. bitch. great chapter...more soon please...an do not let faith change her mind about leavin. more soon, great chapter. and story...
person Hayley
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, very well written. Every story needs a chapter of pure transition to move everything along. I really like the way Faith's reacting to Buffy and her noncommittedness (is that even a word?). I can't wait for the next chapter. Bring on the angst!
person kay
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO NO!!!! dont end it now!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
person allie
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think its great because buffy is being a bitch and i think she deserves it.for what shes put faith through if she really loved her then she would have told her friends.
person Laura
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, but I do so love the angst, it's what makes the story so good. So, please feel free to draw it out. can't wait for the next part
person Syd
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic update. I hadn't read this fic in a while so decided to start again from the beginning and read it all in one sitting. I had forgotten how brilliant this fic is. Love the latest chapter. I am a fan of angst so like what you're doing but hoping for an eventual happy ending. Hoping for updates as soon as possible. Thanks.