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for Touch the Sun

by Electra126

person Anon
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I enjoy the first-person narrative from Faith; you have done a nice job capturing her voice. I know that you see no money for this work, but it is quality writing like this that makes me happy to donate to sites such as AFF. I look forward to the next update.
person rma
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Joyce needs to have a talk with her daughter. You can't use people like that or string them along. That's exactly what she did and would continue to do had not Faith put a stop to it. You would think Joye raised her better. How can she justify doing what she did to both Faith and Riley? As much as BtVS fans don't like him, Riely has feeling too. As for Faith, I say about freaking time. My heart breaks for her but she is doing extactly what she has to do. I hope she is strong enough to leave Buffy and stay away. If Buffy wants her 'normal life' with her 'normal boyfriend' so bad then go for it. Best of luck B and good to be rid of you.

I really don't know how Buffy expects Faith to belive a word that comes out of her mouth again. Ever. The fact that Faith trusted her once was amazing and if she ever trusts Buffy again it would be nothing short of a miracle. A miracle that I am hoping never happens. Buffy is a user through and through. Buffy is dathing Riely to pleese her firends. Right, and I'm the Queen of Rock and Roll.
person Ms Ice
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! plz tell me your updating son...
i slapped the table when i realised you ended with one hell of a cliff hanger.
this story is amazing...it really pulls at the heartstrings. It's got so much goin for it...
and i have to admit that i'm sorta hatin on Buffy at the moment. But i hope she does something that will ease all of Faiths pain away....
i love it dont stop k? i jope this is read by the author and not just a simple review of the story.
person Alison
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As Paris and Nicole say "Loves it" keep it up.
person Dylan
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A nice move into new territory. Not so much angsty as Poignant, and "damn right, Faith...You so need to get away from the situation."...lol. And hey, nice link in with the title. Very clever *wink* Can't wait to see what happens next.
person cristina
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear God!
I swear that I almost fucking cried!
YOU GO!
lol. But honestly, I have been following this for a while now and it just rocks. I love the eay you wrote it and everything. I can seriously feel it. And I feel so freaking bad for Faith and I know it totaly sucks but I am rooting her on....
I also want to throw a BIG fat tomato at you you little cliff hanger you! Bad! lol. jk.
I wonder what Faith is going to say? And poor girl, I bet Buffy is going to throw it in her face maybe even too. Sometimes when you hurt, you lash out in anger, and ouch, make things bad.
And I totaly agree with Faith, and hell, she has put up with a lot of shit.
And Buffy is using her, being selfish in her feelings if you ask me. I wouldnt be surprised if she tries to fight back using phrases like "But if you loved me..." and "You dont understand" and all those other nice nasty phrases, lol.
But ouch, talk about some hurt that she is causing Faith. I wouldnt want another relationship like EVER either! And I mean heck, I can see where she is lead to beleive that Buffy doesnt really love her. I can understand that.
lol, I LOVE the Angst, I think it make a story good, but that is just me, lol.
Am I babbling?
THought so, lol, sorry about that!
Anyway I think you are doing a kick ass job on this and totaly keep it up! ;):)
Its great stuff! :)
person aberahamtulip
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More soon please!
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story Please keep updating and quickly
person vicky
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this story is going so good please keep writing i can't wait to see what happens next
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!!