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for Play Ball!

by patty

person lolita
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay another new story from my fav author! I am loving this story too this first chapter was just so funny - bless little Spike, poor confused male, it cracked me up! Nice to see some more original stuff from ya, although pretty soon people will be stealing your ideanamenamely me! LOL. Only kidding *shifty look*. ;)
person lolita
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness girl - what a place to leave it! You do realise that you are totally evil don't you? *sigh* Well I want to see more soon, I hope that you understand? :)
person mistress
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! what could that problem be?! i'm dying to find out what happens next... keep updating please..
person imandrra
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the "angel n"! i"!
person Cress
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Spike and the whole "angel nurse" thing made my heart flip flop. I know you said this was going to be a short one, but now I have to whine... WHYYYYYY? Can't it be long? Please? Well if not, please update soon. ;)
person jill
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pattyanne...how cruel you are to leave us hanging like that...LOVE the story and cant wait to see if his LARGE problem is stuck in the urinal!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update us PLEASE!!!!!