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November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent. more soon?
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wasgladglad to see you'd updated something...it's been SO long! But please, ase ase as this one is, please Please PLEASE update ATP and some of your other old ones soon! I'll give you a cookie and hugs and puppies!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank-god I had wondered where you were Pattyanne...just love this story and cant wait for the next installment!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whatever happened to The story about the stand up comedian, you left us high and dry on that one!!!
Well keep up the good work and I would love to read another update REAL soon, thanks again..
Whatever happened to The story about the stand up comedian, you left us high and dry on that one!!!
Well keep up the good work and I would love to read another update REAL soon, thanks again..
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I haven't forgotten thne, ne, or abandoned it, I just kind of ran out
of steam for a bit but it WILL be finished, I promise. Next up though is
the next chapter of Blue Eyed Devil, so that should buy me a little time,
right?
of steam for a bit but it WILL be finished, I promise. Next up though is
the next chapter of Blue Eyed Devil, so that should buy me a little time,
right?
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So lovely!!! Please do continue soon!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh
Nice to see you back.....like where you are taking this....really sweet in fact....hope to see more of your other stories soon.
Kimber
Nice to see you back.....like where you are taking this....really sweet in fact....hope to see more of your other stories soon.
Kimber
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It seems like a good start for a AU fic and I don't think the baseball thing has been done before...just to point a few things - You had Spike in room 205 in the first 2 chapters and then in 215 in the third...was there a room change? And you made Alexander Harris his agent in chapter two, but in chapter three you list Xander Harris as being the catcher on tanFranFran Demons... sorry, I tend to pick up that sort of stuff. But the writing is great and I like the story!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I reviewed you on SR already, but I came to see what was going on at AFF and found (to my surprise) that you have no reviews.
See, that?s totally unacceptable so I just thought I?d review.
I think, people are just waiting until you?re finished until they read it, because you have this habit of leaving us on the edge of our seats with nasty cliff hangers.
So?more, sometime soon would be nice.
(And keep Devlin off the booze, I think he?s plastered. That's the only excuse I can come up with to explain why he wrote: [.:Devlin:. Does thing fasten in the back or in the front...?] on your tag-board.)
Nicky x
See, that?s totally unacceptable so I just thought I?d review.
I think, people are just waiting until you?re finished until they read it, because you have this habit of leaving us on the edge of our seats with nasty cliff hangers.
So?more, sometime soon would be nice.
(And keep Devlin off the booze, I think he?s plastered. That's the only excuse I can come up with to explain why he wrote: [.:Devlin:. Does thing fasten in the back or in the front...?] on your tag-board.)
Nicky x
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I'm so happy you continued with this story. I really love the premise can't wait for more!!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fan of your work Pattyanne. Just one small thing...a continuity thing. In chapter 2, Spike's in room 205. Then in chapter 3 he's in room 215. Not a biggie, but I thought maybe you'd want to know.