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for Play Ball!

by patty

person virce
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More more! Update soon!
person Burnz
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a Fun little fic. I hope you finish it one day.
person Lizzie
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, please!!!!! And yes, I don't recall ever reading a story with Spike being a baseball player. So it MUST be original, cause I've been reading for 5 years. Since I was 13, so shhhhhhhh..... I have fallen in love with this story...So, please update sooooon? I'll check on it as much as possible. Oh, and this is the same Elizabeth that has redneck_freak_gurl@yahoo.com. I just wanted to verify that, cause I don't wanna loose my identity. :D Okay, I will go read another of your great stories.

Elizabeth
person patty
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about the lack of recent updates. My father died, and I haven't
felt much like writing. I'll get back to them soon, but I'm afraid other
things have to come first right now.
person disappointed
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am very disappointed in your fanfictions. i think that they all have alot of potential but you have failed to update in a long time. i really would like you to finish writing these stories or at least continue. i dont like to review but i have been checking as often as i could to see if you have been updating you have not and i think that i am going to stop reading all your fanfictions if you dont update soon.
person Burnz
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cute little romance. Loved the abbreviated make out sessions. :)
person Jenn
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it soo much! It was wonderful and I just love Spike.

"I feel something," he said, laying one hand
on his heart. "Right here...you know?"

That's the cutest line ever! It's funny you updated today because just before I was thinking about it. It made me happy when I saw another chappy! Keep it coming, I can't wait until the next part.
person Lissy
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so much fun to read!
person Kimber
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, by my calcuations they aready been on first base and need to move to second, LOL!

Kimber
person Nicky
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful...I love you, I love angel-nurse, and I LOVE indured, pain in the ass Spike, who still retains his charm.

I liked their kisses, and his:

"I feel something...here, you know?"

Just, lovely.


Don't leave us hanging, here.

Nicky xxx