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for Just a Teenage Crush...

by addielogan

person Jerrica
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how long it'll be before Spike loses his composure and tells Buffy in no uncertain terms exactly why it could never work out between the two of them. Considering the emotional torture he's currently going through, and has been going through, he's bound to snap under the pressure sooner rather than later.

I'm also curious to see if Buffy will question the Scoobies about why Spike isn't considered one (Scooby, that is). I mean, he spent the entire summer taking care of Dawn and helping with the slayadge, but hasn't really gotten any recognition for it.

Please update soon!
person Burnz
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Can't say enough good things about a Buffy that can actually show her feelings and a non-whiney Dawn. Excellent.
person Kar
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! can't wait for more. Can't wait until we see what happens with Spike and y's y's gift.
person chanel
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon, I'm totally in love with this story.
person Nadine
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you do rock. You rock hard core. What else can I say to break your self-imposed bout of laziness and WRITE?? Seriously, I'm enjoying the hell out of this fic. It's been excellent so far. You go do your voting thing and come back with lots of Spike-AmnesiaBuffy-fluffy kitty-she-needs-to-get-her-memory-back-and-jump-Spike's-bones-NC17 goodness. I won't get political here. That way usually leads to hurled arguments and pie-slinging. Ad Add a little Spuffy and you've got yourself a fic. Anyways, once again, this is a fun fic and I'm loving what you've got so far. Keep it up!
person shelly
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story!!! I just love the carefree buffy! I hope that when she gets her memories back that she'll still feel that same way. I really enjoy your story and will be eagerly waiting for more!
person mistress
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the dawn-buffy bonding time. it would be really cool if thestaystay that way... and ooohhh a prezzie for spike, how will he react, i can't wait please update soon
person jane
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent amnesiac Buffy is hilarious. I'd love to see her reaction to Angel. I mean he hasn't aged to well, desite being immortal. I would have thought as a 15 year old he'd seem as old as her dad and about as attractive.
I loved the Xander blackmailage as well. his Buff Knows how to handle the Scoobs.
Good luck with the voting, you should see our coverage at the moment. My kds do a great piss take of Bush. All though not funny if you like Bush.
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what he does. More pelase...
person Pattyanne
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, I love this story!! Absolutely and completely love it! I like so
much about it that I can hardly pick out examples. Buffy telling the
scoobies and Giles off. Throwing Xander across the room (always makes
me happy since he's usually acting like a big, fat loud-mouthed
self righteous...well, you get my drift. The way Spike is taking care
of her, and trying so hard not to take advantage. And how come that
bunch of ys hys has forgotten all the good stuff he did while she was
gone? Now they're all, "You can't trust him, he only wants to kill you"
again.

Anyway, looking forward to the next part a whole bunch!