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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHH! that was so hot! and nothings even happend yet! you gotta update this soon! dont make me beg!
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Please, please keep going!
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude i love your work and i hope you keep creating some more work and fanfiction. youta mta make another chapter to this so i can find out what happened and stuff. keep writing because i love to read you work. i give you 4 thumbs up.
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I really like it. update please
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think u are on to something w/ Connections. I really like this story & u should continue writing. I can't wait to read more.
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
revamping is always good, lol. I am currently doing that to a fic I got going on at ff.net, lol. anyway, it's looking good! keep it up!!! ;):)
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pretty decent fic so far...I look forward to see how it continues. The only think I would say is that you need to slow down the writing style a bit...things are moving too fast (I realize it was a 5min time killer, but now that it is hopefully going to be longer I think it would help to add more descriptions, etc). And I think doing so would hyou you better capture Buffy and Faith's personality better, because there were some things that I thought Buffy or Faith would never say or that they would say them differently. I really liked the concept though and I hope you keep writing it!