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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this alot. I always wondered when someone would write a story where Buffy was the cheater and Spike was the victem. Cause in a lot of stories authors let Buffy get away with everything and Spike is punished if he breathes the wrong way. So please keep this up and don't delete.
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is so sad well the flashback was anywas! please update soon i realant ant to know what happens next!
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapters. A little scared of what Angel's gonna do to Will though. Please update soon.
Chris
Chris
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVING IT! absolutely loving it. i'm SO all about this fic, and i can't wait to read more!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story1
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure what you meant by "unknown third person" POV, but if you were talking about the beginning part, that's first person. And third person is always "unknown" so to speak, since it is merely an unnamed narrator relating the events. Interesting beginning, though. I just feel compelled to give a little English lesson now and then, since it seems so many people who claim to be writers are unfamiliar with basic literary terms and conventions.
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay
Here is the review.....I want more of a background of what lead Buffy to pick up with Liam to begin with that would lead her to cheat on her husband, true love and best friend.....
I just hope we have a happy ending, even if it is they go their separate ways to start their lives over......
Kimber
Here is the review.....I want more of a background of what lead Buffy to pick up with Liam to begin with that would lead her to cheat on her husband, true love and best friend.....
I just hope we have a happy ending, even if it is they go their separate ways to start their lives over......
Kimber
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first chapter. Thought it was a great start, but the second chapter seemed to jump from 1st to 4th with nothing in the middle. I understand that you might be taking the story back in the next chapter but maybe you should break up this chapter with a little more of the middle of the story. Just my opinion.
Dee
Dee
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Clear waters? When an author says that, it usually means the direct opposite lol. Was that it? Is there more? I can see that they do love each other, but are so hurt and trying their best in their own way to work through it. Great stuff :)
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please no deleting, I've read it before and would like to read the ending