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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. GREAT writing! REALLY a pleasure to read your story! Love the twist of having the slayers get frisky while in each others' bodies. You've really captured the characters for me... I love the attention you give to Faith's mental processes and her motivations. Very entertaining ! I actually GROANED when I ran out of "next chapter" icons... Don't keep me waiting too long!
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You are one of my fav fanfic writers :) I really like what you have done with this story and I can't wait to see where it ends up!
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH wow! that was such a fuckin AWSOME chapter!!! ya know the whole body swap thing could have gotten REALLY confusing and difficult to understand. but the way you wrote it was just perfect. great job... more now! get them back switched so they can get to business!
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh so cool. Please update soon, real soon.
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more! more! Please! soon!
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woow...that last bit got me Hot QZ. And i'm yelling update right now *grin*. Hope u got more to write about Riley though. Don't get me wrong, i'm not a fan of Riley and never will be. But i hope to see him more than an asshole Riley or love sick puppy Riley or pissed-off by Faith Riley. I just think that *sigh* a more interesting Riley will lead to a more interesting Faith. I mean, Faith would be so much more if Buffy's boyfriend is not an Asshole and Buffy still choose Faith over him....Ehh hope u get what i mean...Anyway..., Just my opinion. Ur fics are soo good that i'm thinking of retiring from my writing career right now. *no kidding*
And Update, update soon, pleaseeeeeeeee :D
And Update, update soon, pleaseeeeeeeee :D
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
QZ, you should be happy to know that this chapter has inspired me to do some of my own fuffy-smut. :D
The scene was hot and well-paced and just about perfect. I think, like, the last 4 lines held the most power in them. You're really good with chapter-ends like that.
I can't wait to see if you bring on the lovin' in the next chapter, or if it's all just a big buildup for heartache.
YOU. ROCK. :D
The scene was hot and well-paced and just about perfect. I think, like, the last 4 lines held the most power in them. You're really good with chapter-ends like that.
I can't wait to see if you bring on the lovin' in the next chapter, or if it's all just a big buildup for heartache.
YOU. ROCK. :D
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good... really like how it's getting along, they are so great together. All the dialogue working so well. Especially liked the talking while fighting. Just like in the best episodes of the series, it's not about the vampires or demons, it's about the characters. Cool, how they're realising how differently their bodies react and how that reflects their personalities. So, more please... :)
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woooooohooo *does a happy update dance* Loving every second of this. What a kiss...*heart's a poundin*...And if I had ANYTHING to do with that last chapter, I'm grinning like a maniac. You might be interested to know, I've done another mp3 tune with Faith on it...but damn Yahell won't let me upload it *sigh* It's better than the first though I think...Ya think it would tempt another update? lol.
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOAAAAAA! That was excellent, QZ! If I wasn't already hooked by the story, I would be now. You are the Queen of plot twists. Just love the way you're rewriting Season 4. I can't wait for the next installment.
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