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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just Wow. Phenomenal. You pack so much emotion into your story and paint such a beautiful vivid picture of Slayer luvin'. Chapter 14 pretty much made my head explode. All that lovely Faith 'n' Buffy heat with the suprisingly dominant-outdoors Buffy and the sexy play-wrasslin' foreplay and that visual you provided of both slayers wrapped in the most intimate of embraces.. whew. Just....wow. I could read another 100 chapters if you feel up to it!
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally! i you knew you could write it all along...my melted monitor bears testament to your brilliant ability.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fuqin hawt
Keep it up, I love this story way too much
Keep it up, I love this story way too much
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chapter! i mean really! it was so touching, the way you wrote every scenes.
im so glad theyre happy, please dont make them sad ever again!
im so glad theyre happy, please dont make them sad ever again!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! Definitely worth the wait. Keep it coming, it's a great story.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13...An emotional storm of subtlety. You do it so well. It's like sitting in the eye of a hurricane or something cos you make me sit still with the fact you don't overstate stuff (my mistake, I know), yet everything is clear. I can feel the storm whirling about me, but the feelings and intent of both Buffy and Faith are so clearly and undramatically conveyed, that I get it without you slamming flying debris into my head to make sure I get it. Non of that probably makes sense to you...but hey, I know what I mean....lol Great stuff...and like I said on list, I'm not even waiting for you to just get to the sex like I feel I do with a lot of stories, I just wanna have you keep me in the eye of the storm *wink*
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, everything's mostly resolved now....or is it? I hope this isn't the end of the story. I think I'd be kinda sad if it ends.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude!
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I really love this story. I hope to see more soon. This one is so much better than most of the post season three buffy faith stories. So many of them just shove the two together without any thought at all. Using the body swap and giving faith memory loss were great ideas.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
way cool (the disappearing scar part). Great story. please update soon.