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DA DA DUM is rite!! KEEP WRITING PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

Nice alterations to the "original"story. Like this one much better. Please update soon!

Great that you found the plot, does that mean more updates are on the way soon... Anyway, the story really seems to getting somewhere, and you really know how to keep up the suspense. Can't wait to how the body swap goes in this story.

Whooooooo! We're really getting into it now. Loving it.

Oh shit! Update again, please, now, soon?! I need more!!! :)

Whoa...this is getting good! I really like how Faith had Willow pegged in high school. More soon please!

continue this plz! and get some faith/buffy action in there soon! ;)

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoree. that was good. i hate riley. get rid of him fast

Ok, the het sex wasn't so bad considering it was the thought of Faith that got her rocks off in the end...Ya know, I was thinking when I was reading this, that most other stories read like fics, but yours, well, it's like sitting down to read a good book. In a way it makes me want to stop reading...Not cos I don't want to know what heappens and stuff, but because I want to read it all at once, as if it really were a book. Does that make sense? I hope so. Anyway, I feel the need for this one to be nice and long and a little angsty and then happy and lovin and sexy and all those things I wanna read in a good Fuffy story. You should just forget about real life, about your social life, about anything else, and just write more of this. Just for me *wink*

Such amazing chapters brought to us yet again. It's just the reason why I like your stories so much; it's all about the story. And there seems to be so much story here. Like Dylan said it's just like reading a book. PWPs and such are nice and hot, but it was just the stories that got me interested in Buffy fan fiction in the first place, hot action was just an added bonus. And you can deliver both so well.

A nice Willow is good for change, not always messing things between Buffy and Faith. The dialogue between then worked so well, it was easy to imagine both of them saying those things. And also giving different reason for Willow not to like Faith was great idea. Faith with memory loss also acting just like I'd imagine she would. Just trying to find out what?s happening around her. Plus the way she doesn't want to be the person everyone thinks she is great. Joyce supporting Faith always good stuff. It was even in the show, but still it great that Faith has at least someone really on her side, and it's great that she realises that. But clearly things don't ever come easy for them so some angst may be needed, but not too much. And Riley, he seems to be just a obstacle between Buffy & Faith. Well he is boring and so not suitable for Buffy, but it would be interesting if he wasn?t too much of a bad guy for change. Believe me I'm no Riley fan and it's your story, but just thought that it would be a different thing in Fuffy genre

Also noticed that there's some errors in older chapters, like in the end of chapter three "Once or twice Faith heard her start to k, bk, but in the end, she walked away." Probably just due to recent problems with this site, but you might want to correct those...