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by patty

person virce
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I'll give this story a tentative thumbs up. Tentative because your writing style is brilliant as always and I'm curious as to how they'll turn out but I'm afraid at the same time. When I read the story I felt a bit hurt... as if I'm Buffy. Maybe a female point of view? When the BtVS Buffy hurt Spike I didn't feel the same way. Oh well. I'm definitely curious though. Please continue the story!
person Jerrica
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I for one would very much like to see this story continued. I've had half a mind to write a similar story myself, but I'm positive that you could do a much better job of it. I agree with you that Spike wasn't being cruel to Buffy, he just wasn't doting on and bending himself backwards for her like he did on the show, and since this Spike isn't in love with her (yet, anyway) there's no reason why he should tip-toe around her emotions. He may be chipped, but, as he likes to point out, he's still evil. He may not reciprocate Buffy's feelings, but at least he isn't turning them against her, or using them to get what he wants, like she did to him. I can't wait to see what kind of ideas you have for this story, and how Buffy will go about getting Spike to fall in love with her.

Please update soon!
person sinkoreq
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was harsh men you keep on with this story and we will keep reading.
person judy
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have just read this story. please continue, you got my attention
person Shay
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always wanted to read a story where Buffy was the one treated like dirt. I always did hate the way Spike was treated. Please continue, I would love to see where this goes.
person spikestheman
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey Pattyanne, just read this for the first time and wondered why you didnt continue?I would love to know what happens next, and I know it will end well because as you say it is YOU!!!!
Any chance you might rethink and update?PLEASE lots of SPUFFY, also would love an update on PLAYBALL, hows he doin in that hospital surely he must be coming out soon, HERE'S HOPING!!!!
person Shay
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one area Joss should have taken on the show. Do a flip where Spike was the slayer and Buffy was at the other end of Spikes 'bitchyness', Xander's moronic comments and the general outsiderness Spike had to endure. Continue this, I want to see where it goes.
person jane
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is briliant so hope you're gonna finish it.
person Sofia
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shit! Ppl! Patty is right! She's PATTY!!! Hey the greatest writer ever! In my opinion sure she is! Pat, I wanted to write you an e-mail, and I'm going to, I wrote you once, I was the one from Hungary, well this story is kind of... EXCITING!!! You always come up with something sooo NEW!!! :) OK first I freaked out, cause I missed Spike's mushy self cause usually you write it sooo toroughly but I grasped your meaning in the authors note... so pls continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and don't forget acting the part too, cause I'm hanging on it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv:Sxxx
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please. Love all your stuff.