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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The thing with Xander as a hyena is really great. That particualar episode was always my favorite... Hope I?ll see more chapters, hopefully along with more sex!
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. The first, I especially like in it, that Xander, even being under a hyena-possession, is not a cruel and killing animal. I read fics in which hyena!Xander usually covers all around himself in blood, and I am sick from it.
The second, that i like in this story are relationships between Xander and the whole Scooby-gang. As against many fics, Xander doesn't run away, doing senseless po and and murders, and stays with the friends, protecting * his * pack and * his * city. I am also pleased, with what respect and patience his friends accept changes in ???????. Accept them, instead of push it (and him) away.
I also have noticed, that Buffy there was a little more reasonable, listening to Xander's words, than usually in fics. I think, it's useful for her, to listen sometimes to somebody else, in order to not become bitch!Buffy. (I wonder, what it would be like, if at the end of story Buffy already with faith and pride carried out and pride carried out Xander's rs -rs - similarly to the soldier from his general, instead of to the servant from his owner - and if she was proud of each praise from the "pack-leader")
And of course, I in admiration from Xander's pursuing Spike. Xander's persistence and seducement, Spike's confusing feel and and desires, all their interaction force me shiver in anticipation and with impatience to expect future, in general . And, damn it, Spike is HOT, when he craves to submit and be dominated!
So, thank you and, please, write more.
The second, that i like in this story are relationships between Xander and the whole Scooby-gang. As against many fics, Xander doesn't run away, doing senseless po and and murders, and stays with the friends, protecting * his * pack and * his * city. I am also pleased, with what respect and patience his friends accept changes in ???????. Accept them, instead of push it (and him) away.
I also have noticed, that Buffy there was a little more reasonable, listening to Xander's words, than usually in fics. I think, it's useful for her, to listen sometimes to somebody else, in order to not become bitch!Buffy. (I wonder, what it would be like, if at the end of story Buffy already with faith and pride carried out and pride carried out Xander's rs -rs - similarly to the soldier from his general, instead of to the servant from his owner - and if she was proud of each praise from the "pack-leader")
And of course, I in admiration from Xander's pursuing Spike. Xander's persistence and seducement, Spike's confusing feel and and desires, all their interaction force me shiver in anticipation and with impatience to expect future, in general . And, damn it, Spike is HOT, when he craves to submit and be dominated!
So, thank you and, please, write more.
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please continue with it!
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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gah, this is fantastic. I like Hyena Xander - and I like not making buffy a big bitch. that always annoys me too. fantastic - i hope there is more soon! its a nice break from classes.
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like how the team isn't trying to push Xander to do something he doesn't want to. A nice break from the usual cannon where something cool happens to Xander that doesn't hurt him, but because it's not 'human' it must be evil and destroyed. Very cool work. Can't wait to read more.^_~ And Buffy isn't a super-uber-I'm-the-slayer-my-word-is-law bitch. Nice. I don't like her, like isn't a strong enough work, but another break from cannon is always refreshing.
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so F*CKING GOOD!! I hope you continue. I love how Xander's in control with the hyena and dedicated to his pack. I hope Xander gets a mate soon, wink-wink. Like say, everyone's favorite sexy blonde vampire? Plus if Riley ever gets his ass handed to him by a hyena Xander... And it's nice to see Buffy isn't a total insane bitch in like some other fics. Can't wait to read more. ^_^
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more please
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is the best xander/hyena fic ive read! plz update soon!
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, nice Hyena!Xander. I absolutely adore the animalistic side of our boy, and it was very nice of you to give us that quicklogulogue to explain why the hyena's still around. It makes sense. Whoo! Please, please, please continue!
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read Hyena Xander stories before, difference is you gave the Hyena a character. Which I love, I hope you continue this.