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for Fisi Mtima

by frkwerewolf

schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Squees* omg, i so loved this! great job on the characters and their personalities and emotions. and the scenes between the two were hot! wonderful job on this, everything just fell into place perfectly!
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have created a wonderful story! :D
I love the plot, the basic idea of both having two souls and them having to blend into one.
And to top it all off (the characterization which was IC, the pretty plot) you wrote it wonderfully!
Awesome work! :D
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Doesn't matter that this is 3 yrs old. It's one of the finest pieces I've ever read. And since I started reading at 18 months and I'm 40 now that says a lot.
person dmalfoy
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story. Very well written and a great read! Bravo!!!
person jen
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it that you put Xander in the dominant role.. soo sexy.

What can I say? Great story gonna find out wether you've written more stories:)
person Alysa
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Fantastical! Full of awesomeness and yum and really good story stuff and I loved it. Forevermore it holds a special place in my heart. Go submissive Spike! Go for the Gold!
person Soraslight
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:runs over to author and gives a great big huge: Thank you! That was awesome! And it just wasn't about sex but their relationship played well into the story as well. I loved how portrayed all the characters so very well! Thanks to you I have a new favorite Buffy couple: Spike/Xander. It also helps that you used my favorite aspect of Xander...the hyena. Anyway, it is a shame that it ended...but at least I can print it out and use for safe keeping. Great job, my friend!!
person katla
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story! very well done.
person HarleyD
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was so great - and I appreciate that you came to a coherent ending instead of leaving it up in the air - and I always appreciate the appearance of cute lil William. Fantastic story and it was nice to shove off studying for finals for a little while! Delicious story, I simply adore it.
person Nostradarmus
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great writing. You got the dialog between spike and Xander perfect and the amount of posessiveness ozing from xander was almost palpable and was written with persision and expert timing ;) I offer my congratulations and hope to see more of your writting in the future