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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Please update soon!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can i say awww! how sweet was Spike? and the bond breakage? plz no-- leave them together plz? more soon cant w8 cya x
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, you're good. Just pumping with sensuality and oozing with sex....well written, well read!
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...that chapter was brilliant. i wasn't sure where you were going but i enjoyed where you ended. thanks.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aw! I loved that ending! It was so sweet! Great chapter! Loved their reaction to the spell and Buffy trying to dress in a way that Spwoulwouldnt find attractive, that was great! Cant wait for more!
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. This is such an erotic story. I love your enticing descriptions. Spike is always irresistable, but in this story, he's downright sinfully delicious. You've created an interesting, capivating story with characters I adore. You've kept the characters' qualities and personalities, but you've added additional spice that's decadent and sexy. I am LOVING your story. Please continue as often and as much as you possibly can. : )
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
erfect chapter superbly written
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!
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September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
TWO CHAPTERS! That made my day! Love your story! Word of advice though, you should go back and fix all the spelling and puncuation errors. That was really starting to bug me, you would capitolize a word in the middle of a sentence or leave out a whole word. I mean I love early updates but you should still take time to get it beta read or something.
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off, I have to say, I love the way Spike is trying to fight his feelings for Buffy. It is so neat to have an idea of the kind of jumbled up mess that is going on inside his head. I love how Buffy is trying to fight everything as well. The whole part in the bedroom where she starts swinging at him and they end up on the floor with her laughing is just so funny. All in all, another couple of great chapters..Keep up the good work I look forward to your next update!!