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for Pursuit

by magista

person Aisling
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please more soon :D cya x
person kiss_me
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"the dark is in her"

very gd line-- really a gr8 way to use drus vsions to see buffys impending downward spiral. really cant w8 4 more- also wanting to read more spuffy interaction and smut. as well as the consequences for them 2! :D cya x
person txjmfan
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting direction the story is headed. Look forward to reading more soon.
person Cali
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have continued your deliciously dark adaptation of Season Two. I am SO glad. Found sneaky Spike's mad scramble to keep the full truth of his steamy encounter with Buffy from Dru very amusing. You capture the Spike & Dru dynamic very well. I like how you are giving both Buffy & Spike depth & complexity...not just dark...not simply evil...that is what makes your story seductively fascinating to me. I could feel Buffy's despair. I could sense Spike's subtle confusion. Your story is a hot mixture of complications. Thank you for another taste. I hope there is more in my future.
person jane
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was hot, really like this wanna see how dark buffy turns out.
person Aria
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You write so well. Season Two voices seem so long ago but you have managed to capture everyone beautifullan'tan't wait to read where you take this. It feels like it's going to be an interesting ride.
person Cali
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn...that is...steamy...with just enough of wrong to make it...oh so right. Perfect early Spike. Perfect early glimpse of the darkside of Buffy. I really like stories set in Season Two...I really adore excellently written stories set in Season Two. I adore your story. I love the hot harshness between the two of them but you still give hints that there c be be so much more. Is there going to be more? I fervently hope yes but what matters is thanking you for sharing this story...thank you...I enjoyed it.
person kiss_me
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! wow! this is gd! cant w8 4 more... any body getting a season 6 deja vu? just me? lol ha serves angel right! stake him? more spuffy smut plz? with spike on top? whipped cream, cherries and chocolate covered? cya huni luv ya xxx
person KariMouke
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I adore dark Buffy stories. You've definitely created something unique here and I can't wait for more.
person kendall
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! What a chapter! wonderfully done!a new chapter soon, I hope? :)