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person Nao Kuga
schedule December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
too cute! WOuld've wanted a lil more Riley stalking to Faith could kick his ass, but it was pretty nice either way XD
person Emanuel
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really nice story! I'm sorry that I haven't found it sooner, as I would have given you feedback for every chapter, instead of reading the whole thing in one sweep and then reviewing it afterwards. I liked the idea, how you had things progress at a believable pace (even though that means you turned a straight girl into a pussy-whipped on in about 5 days), the little angsty twist near the end, the pretty graphic sex stuff even closer to the end and the end itself. It really was a perfect ending to a very neat story. Thanks for writing and posting it!
person Dani
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude... That was beautiful!
person sliverblade
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love my me laugh alot. This should have been on a porn or tv. ********
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it
You should do a sequel
^_^~
person Raquel
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story to death. I thought it was the cutest and sexiest thing that I have ever read. Your writing is frantisic. Thanks for the story.
person Kat
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By far the best ending I have ever seen in a story. I was listening to the song "Truly, Madly, Deeply" by Savage Garden, and it was the perfect fit for the ending. I'm recommending this story.
person A fan
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I have thoroughly enjoyed your story, not sure if I've reviewed before if not I apologise now as I'm somewhat sloppy at it but I found this not long after you started writing it and have followed it avidly since, well done a very enjoyable, well-written engrossing story. Thank you very much indeed :-D
person Dylan
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say that hasn't been said?...lol Great handle on the charcters. Humour. Hot sex (very much so...*big grin*) A perfect ending. I feel like I should quit where I am with the fics, cos you have it all covered...Go write more, you gorgeous, cute, delicious, talented writer you *wink*
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is possibly the best Buffy and Faith fic I've ever had the pleasure of reading. The characters were so real, so spot on. The humor and the drama were blended seemlessly.. The answering machine message was a stroke of pure geinus. The dialouge was wonderful. You have fast become one of my favorite fic writers, bar none. I would be honored if at some point, you might be willing to take a look at a fic I'm working on. I would love to have an expert opinion on it. I keep rereading the basement scene, makes me laugh every time. That was the perfect ending, things flowed so smoothly, it was just perfect. One more comment on this amazing story, damn were those some hot scenes. You managed to blend the sex with plot in a way I have not seen done before. You managed to retain the plot, and the hotness of the scenes. I look forward to seeing what you write next.

Blessed Be,
Sarah