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for Forbidden Fruit

by Faith4eva

person LaJolie
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I got the impression you switched the two chapters? Other than that, like your story. Please continue?
person sliverblade
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to fucking update for the love of god please update
person blu
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man this is really good....loved how the story started.....more of the forbidden fruit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person The chosen 1
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue this, it cud get interesting
person faithluver
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you need to update this story, it is great and definitly has potential, PLEASE update, i wanna know what happens PLEASE
person rosana
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eh!, ?cu?ndo vas a acabar este fic?. Nos has dejado con la miel en los labios...
person LJ
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo im lookin forward to the juicier stuff...assuming it is gonna get juicier ... ne ways it was a great update...keep it comin
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehehehe, nothing! Hurry up and update!
person LJ
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like this one...love the whole college roomate setup...cant wait for more
person Queen Zulu
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm the kind of girl who looks for a bit more set up in stories that are this AU. If you change too much, I start wondering where the backstory is. So yeah. There you go.