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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really likin' this! I like the POVs. It's different.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey i'm just a little confused about the time this is set in and the ages, this isnt set in 2004 is it? If that was the case Buffy would be 23, i'm also a little confused about Williams age, is he 15?, maybe i'm just being a little dumb, but then i have had a few beers so maybe i'm just not fully paying attension. Heh if you could clear this up for me it would be appreciated.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's an interesting start... though i really have to say I reeeaaally dislike anything that's not written in third person.
But that's just me!
Update sooN!
But that's just me!
Update sooN!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I honestly hope you continue with this story and can update regularly (i can understand of course that this isnt always possible).
It has been a while since a story has grabbed me so quickly in the first chapteo aso as I was saying, I hope you continue!
It has been a while since a story has grabbed me so quickly in the first chapteo aso as I was saying, I hope you continue!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really feel for these characters. Poor William! You've got a good set up, a great back story for these characters and I'm excited to see what happens.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're right, the chapters are very short, but the story is very good. I'm enjoying it,
and looking forward to more, although I may wait until you have several chapters
done before I come back to it. Then again, I may not. It's a good story.
and looking forward to more, although I may wait until you have several chapters
done before I come back to it. Then again, I may not. It's a good story.
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
liking it so far. i'd love to see where this iing ing :)
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious to read more. It has a promising start! Concerned about Uncle Angel lol. Post more! :)
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, intriguing. Can't wait for an update! Given the pairings and indications of your summary shouldn't it be rated NC17?
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued to say the least! I really want to read more!! I hope you update soon!! :-)