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for Cause and Effect

by elizashaw

schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, is that the last chapter, or will there be more?

I vote for more!!
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, they're both alive and the first slayer's not going to get the. But they've gone all angsty and stanoffish again, please fix them.
person babe
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have been following this fic for ages, good to see an update. good characterisation i think, plus my favourite ingredient for any fic...angst. good stuff.
person krimson
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for this well written and engrossing story.
person aleigh
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love S/X and I love any fic where Xander finally comes to his senses that not all demons are bad.
person Jen
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO xander:) I loved it that it was Xander saying that there isn't just good and bad and demons are bad. Very cryptic ending can't wait for more
person JLH
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful story. Your characterisations are spot on, the dialogue engaging and consistently believable and the storyline intriguing and compelling...

Encore!!

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person Jen
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome writing. love the way you describe Spike's and Xander's relationship and their struggles with themselves. I hope Fred's0 plan will work. Please update soon
person RemityGirl
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story!! I love the care/fear/comfort between Spike and Xander....it's just so real. Please update again and soon.

and er... I've never mentioned this in FB before... but there are quite a few spelling and syntax errors in this story that spell-check could easily catch and clean up. Just a thought....it would make the story even more enjoyable to read if we were always sure of what you're actually trying to say. I'm not flamin' you....believe me, please..... and I'd love to beta for you...if you don't hate me already...LOL!!

Thanks for sharing!!
person Rivana
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heya love, you write good angst. I love the way you're portraying the characters. Would like to background to just why Xander got on that plane. Just, you know. Some reason. Maybe. Heck I don't know. It's good anyways... Write more. I wanna read. *hugz*