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for Wounded Hearts

by sluggie

person Brunettepet
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're doing a good job conveying both Spike and Buffy's grief and loss. The circumstances were an excellent plot device to pull them together, and you're making the story ring true emotionally. The attention to detail on their cross country journey has painted a vivid picture.
person MarzBar
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and read straight through. I hope they can forgive themselves quickly for doing the most natural thing in the world (sex to verify life when death comes to call). More please.
person Mariana
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first things first...so glaaaad you're back!!! and that you've updated this amazing story..
this chapter though it was kinda sad...i mean they have to go through a long mourning before it all gets better...it gives hope for future spuffy
and i'm betting it's going to be one heck of an awkard next morning...mmm
anyhow!!! loved it!! and please please please...i'm begging here...please...update soon...thanx!!
person NEO
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hope to see more soon!
person ace
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how heartwrenching. I feel so sorry for these two. I only hope that they didn't screw up too badly here.

Glad to see you posting more of this story. Looking forward to more of this, as well as more chapters of your other stories!!
person txjmfan
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just checking for an update on this story. I love it so far and hope it continues...SOON?!
person wanda
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your piece is coming along but I wish you would update more often. It is easy to loose tract of a piece that is not updated every so often. It is like reading a book one page a month
person white rabbit
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO sad...please heal them soon. And up date quicker...please, please
person Mariana
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!! please more soon
thanx
person Aisling
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more soon sweeetie gotta luv the blond in buffy :)