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for Brave New World

by Carita

person martin
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ohh I like this... I wasen't glad about the rape and tortute in the beggining though =(
but I held on and now I can't wait for revenge... hope u update soon!
person Kari2001
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! I can't tell you how excited i was at seeing this. I loved this story when i first read it like forever ago and have been patiently waiting for a new chapter. My only complaint was that it was too short, but i'll take it back if you have another chapter out real soon. And if there is a list or something that you have for updates on this story i'd very much like to know please.
person Amber
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay for a new chapter! Relieved to see B mad made it through alright. Can't wait for more! This story is awesome.
person Rose
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I think it's great that this story is finally getting back underway, and a big THANK YOU for doing it. The last chapter was really good and I can't wait to read more.
person Juliya
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please I love this story so much, but can you upload the chaps on another website? I hate the format here, it's so hard to read.
person cherie
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
reviewing again as I am still hooked and so pleased that you are continuing this epic and engrossing tale - I do hope you keep going!
If you need a beta writer I can have a go for you

Keep writing and I will keep enjoying!

person Amber
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story! It's seriously a Spuffy work of art. I'm looking forward to the next chapter as the last leftleft off on a bit of a cliffhanger. If you're still looking for a beta, just let me know. I've beta'd for others and I always appreciate the first glance! (especially for this story) Keep up the great work. *sits by computer waiting for more!*
person Angi
schedule April 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope you find a beta-reader soon, so the story can be finished.
You kick ass, you know. I?m glad to see that there is more to adult fanfiction than "Whooohooo, who can think of the most disgusting
sex practices and degradation" although to some grade it has been included in your story, but not that graphic that I can?t stand
reading it. So yeah - ts fos for a story with a thrilling plot! Keep the quality writing up!
person deekm
schedule April 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!Am glad to see that this story is gonna be updated and hopefully finished. its one of my favorites on the net. i've reread it several times.
person lynette
schedule April 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Thanks so much for letting your fans know what's going on with you. It makes waiting easier. I'm sure you'll find a good beta reader soon. Good luck! Till the next chapter.

Lynette