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for Undoing the Laces

by sluggie

person Anon
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please. I want to see them work through things.
person Jenn
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was great, there was a lot of emotion in this story. I love it, and it is well written. Keep it up I cant wait for more.
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, it's really interesting, and I can't wait to find out what happens next, please write more soon =)
person Jenn
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. It's sad but in a good way. I really hope you continue with it I believe theres a lot of potential.
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please. I hope they do work things out.
person lucky021
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly painful, and the perfect twist on the scene in Dead Things. This keeps getting more and more intriguing, I really want to see them get some of the help they need. Great job, can't wait for more.
person Samolly
schedule August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! This story is really good. Extremely powerful. More please!!!

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