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for Undoing the Laces

by sluggie

person Jenny
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. This is a very good story and I can't wait to read more of it.

//Jenny
person pinkyblue_ice
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
person spuffylover
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigodddddd,it's so heartbreakinggg! i really really hate Mr. Harris right now=)please make a happy ending, will you?keep it up
person Amanda
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update this is a good story
person txjmfan
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Very emotional. Excellent writing.
person spikez angel
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah. depressing much? buffy is such a bitch, it's kind of a relief actually...she's always giving into spike, but 2 see her like this...it's actually kinda freaky...i think im gonna get very very depressed if i don't get lots of updates soon coz this fic is just...wow.poor spike n buffy wen they were kids :( hang on...spike isn't spike in this is he? he's william...i was so into the story that i didn't notice! i wanna know what happens with them, n i hope buffy stops hurting spi-,sorry, william and goes 2 see tara and gets some help. again, wow.

xxx blessed be xxx
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really want to see how they work things out. More please!
person Aisling
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me like! very sad, angry, etc :D but good if u get me cant wait for more. reminds me of the Butterfly Effect.. seen it? its good-- directors cut is the best tho :D cya xxx
person i_digress
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a phenominal story. It's so very dark and bitter but quite moving as well. I enjoy your stories but this is the most intriguing thing you've written so far. Even if it takes forever to finish please don't loose the tone you've set - it's too unusual and special to let go of. Having said that...I'm really looking forward to more.
person txjmfan
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...very emotional beginning. "Enjoying" doesn't seemed to be the right word for this one, considering the subject matter at the moment. However, it is a well-written and I plan to continue reading it, as I think it is going to be an amazing story for these two characters.