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for A World of Their Own

by jameschick

person Sparky
schedule April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a great chapter. i love it when spike bottoms! lol please update soon, and don't forget about Quantum Xander either!!
person QueenBoadicea
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 18 Yeah, I thought of that solution, too. I just wasn't sure whether you would put it in your story. See, great minds think alike.:D
person Sparky
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was another great chapter, but then what else can we expect from you! lol please update soon, this is one of my favorite fic starring my two lovely boys. Anyway, I am thinking that maybe not everything will stay peachy keen for them though, where is the drama in that. anyway, i have been wondering why tehre is no other sign of human/demon life in X/S's world. where is everyone? lol anyway, i have rambled on enough for now. Anyway, i hope the next chapter has Wesley and faith gettin' it on, lol. and i mean that in a physical fighing with trisha kinda way. not the sweaty-bare skin kinda way. at least not yet. and you know what else would be fantastic? seeing Happy!Angel with his baby. anyway. update soon! and don't forget about Quantum Xander either!
person DittoSpikette
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. :D Luv Ditto xxoo
person sparky
schedule April 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, this is great! i love that trisha is becoming more human, lol. and yay! wesley! i love him!! lol please have him and Faith get together! they would rock together! lol and i am glad that willow is going to visit spike and xander before just pulling them back to their world. please update soon!
person QueenB
schedule April 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 17 Good idea. We wouldn't want Willow to walk in on Xander/Spike goodness--would we?:D
person Carrie
schedule April 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh more please:)
person Sparky
schedule April 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Nice!Faith is my favorite! lol please update soon! this was a really great fic. i can'tt tot to see what happens when Willow brings Spike and Xander back. I am suprised she hasn't already! :) anyway, please update soon!
person QueenBoadicea
schedule April 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 16 Thanks for another great chapter. It almost looks as if the boys will be cumming--oops, I meant, coming home soon.
person QueenB
schedule April 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 15 I like the way you've incorporated the A.I. team into this story. It was short and succinct without being abrupt and the transition from Sunnydale to L.A. didn't feel at all forced or unnatural. You're truly a gifted storyteller, james. I wasn't even impatient at the active lack of Xander and Spike in this chapter. I'm eagerly awaiting any further additions.