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for My May Day Human

by Raihne

person WindandSummer
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg i love this side of Spike it is so adorable. Please update soon!
person Maeve
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the second chapter....spike with dry macaroni around his neck....if you could see me now I am on the floor laughing and my face is turning bright red. I have been looking up on this story every so often to see if you had updated it and I was so excited to find a second chapter that I bounced in my chair while reading it. I hope to see more soon, it is a really good story. I have been looking for a fic where spike meets xander when he is little and becomes friends with him.
person Alice
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, I like it. I like the young Xander/ Spike dynamic. Please continue. I want to know how things are going to go later.
person Mandylynn
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! This is so cute! I love little Xan and not-so-scary Spike.

Keep up the good work!
person Christine
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Xander is soo adorable and I absolutely love the premise for this story. Macaroni collar...that is soo cute! I'm dying to find out what happens next. Please post more, SOON!
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh love this story so sweet
person Falcon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh keep going!!! The image of the Big Bad with a macaroni necklace had me laughing. But the cool part was that it was written well *G*. I'm looking forward to reading the next part. Update soon!
person Merry
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh bloody brilliant! Continue? Please? With a chocolate covered Xander and Spike with whipped cream and a cherry on top? Ahem, got a bit carried away with that imagery, lol, but carry on with the ficly goodness!

~Merry~
person TheShadowCat
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story, but there's one problem. 10 year olds do NOT act that way. I've been around one enough to know what I'm talking about. Xander is acting more like a 5 year old. Other than that, good story.
person Yukiko_xAkuma
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make it a series please please please thank you