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for My May Day Human

by Raihne

person Anon
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooowww its so sweet please write more chapters soon
person A.J
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really love this story and Have been popping back to the site to check for updates. I was so pleased when I looked today to see that you had updated. I love Xander/Spike stories and stories that have Vampires, and Spike in particular, behaving in a way that the watches tell us they wouldnt behave. I really hope you write many more chapters. Thank you for sharing this story with us, can't wait for the next part, but I will.

A.J
person AmaRae
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::bounces up and down in her computer chair:: Please please please please write more on this ficcy! ::prostrates herself in supplication in front of the almighty Raihne's computer desk:: I first found this story on your site, and instantly fell in love with the plot. It's unusual and amazing to find a Child!Xander/Spike friendship-slash story that isn't Spike raising Xan to be evil((not that theres anything wrong with Evil!Xander!::drools::)) or really badly written((yours is the complete opposite of badly written)). ::raises offerings of fresh baked double fudge brownies and a Spike plushy::
person pixi
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ams amused
person Hajnie-chan
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, my Goodness! It's so cute!! Spike is just... I can't find the words...extra wonderfully cutie cute! lol And Xander is just as adorable!... you really made my day! I can't wait to read more, please update soon!!
person Robyn
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. Kid!Xander, Inquisitive yet innocent in his understanding of the world around him. Spike, inquisitive as to his own nature since he is not innocent to the world around him. A nice mixture and a storyline that can go many, many places. This one is worth continuing.
person Su
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Young Xander is so cute. You have to keep going I want to see what happens over the summer and how they are going to handle meeting up again.
person kat
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really like this fic hope your going to update soon. Like the bit when xander's mum says he can keep spike if he sleeps can't wait to see what happens next.
person Kris
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"After killing twenty something demons in the Sunnydale streets, the others learned not to tease the vamp about his new accesory." definantly one of my favorite lines. PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE update this soon! Before anything else! This is so crazy cute, i wanna see how xander handles having his own vamp and how Spike handle's being "kept". Like we've been shown a little bit of it but I want more (please and thankyou)! It's all very cute so far. Are you eventualy gonna show Spike and Xander in the future?Well, future for them, not really future for us... ya know what I mean (I think) Hope there's more of this soon!
tons of love
Kris
person ran
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you just have to continue this fic.. its toooo cute!!!!