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for The Lawyer

by raycheld20

person Shayera
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why don't you continue with this story? pleeeeeeeeease!
person JoJo
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, just to let you know...I need this story to continue as soon as possible...I really like it...

Ta ta for now sweets...
person Historics
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I need a new chapter !!! ;) You got me all excited and no new chapters ??? Just keep it smutty...sometimes even dirty...and if you wanna come back to all that love crap that people seem to enjoy in some stories, go ahead...NEW CHAPTER, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE... ;)
person Historics
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey...REALLY good story there...That's one of the few non-spuffy fic that I'm actually liking...If you can keep up with the smtu without going into that eternal love kind of crap, that doesn't really exist in real life, if you make something messed up between Buffy and Lindsey without the "I Love You Forever"s that, even in spuffy fics, sometimes, annoys the hell out of me, it'll be GREAT ! And if you make a regular chapter, and a smut chapter, like, in chapter 6 there will be smut, and in chapter seven no, but in chapter 8, more smut...or if you put a little smut in every chapter, that's even better. It's a kind of smut that isn't spuffy that Ienjoyed because it doesn't have "I love you's".... well anyway, I'm no Beta and I've never tried my hand on this, but I REALLY liked your story....so KEEP GOING.

Historics
(it's a nickname by the way, it's that I'm majoring in history ;)
person becky
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was uber hot! i just love the lindsey/buffy stories! please write more!!!
person becky
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome! i just love lindsey and buffy stories cuz they are soooo hot! cant wait to read more good job!