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for A Trunk Full of Trouble

by MadRog

person Darkezza
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dana, pet, lovin' the story, but either you're using a mac or forgetting to turn off the "smart quotes" 'cause all your punctuation is turning into gobblegook and making it very hard to read here. Please try "plain text" next time and get back to writting! Can't wait for the next installment. Best regards,
Darkezza
person Michelle
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, please don't go on to anoter story. I really love this one. I can't wait to find out what happens When Angel catches up with the blonde duo.
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So sorry to have been neglectful. I really like the story... what a brat! Faster updates would make me more attentive and appreciative. What's with the funny typing signs? It's kind of confusing.
person Fifi
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, REally enjoying the story, I had a good laugh at the strangulation part because I would have strangled much earlier. Good story and good chapter
person Kimber
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO


Oh what a surprise......I never watched the movie so I have no clue where this might be going....and so far I love it. Just one question

Would she not have picked up the fact he is a vampire....since she would have the "spidey senses of a slayer." Just curious.

Kimber
person Shippy
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't keep us waiting! Update soon please, great stuff!
person Kimber
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO


Oh God, chapter one was a hoot......that the mire sight of a tied up blonde would be enough to knock a sexy vamp on his leathered ass is just fucking funny.......and you did it was such clarity I visioned it and laughed out loud.....NOw on to chapter 2. hmmm, maybe I will find out if Xander is demon, human, or demon magnet....LOL


Kimber
person Mariana
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'd really like to see where this one is going
i love the way you've pictured spike
hope you update soon!!!
person Burnz
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fun so far. I look forward to where you go with this. ;)
person Diane
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this idea - I've seen the movie and I think it will be even better story with a Spuffy twist.