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for She Don't Know

by Hannahleeann

person krysy kent
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was wondering, is this story, by any chance, based on 'Dont Take the Girl' by Tim McGraw? at all? cos the the part where buffy first goes into labour, and slips into a coma really reminds me of that song, which really means a lot to me and my family. you should listen to it, if you haven't already.
person Irissss
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After many tears I have finished reading this story, The Spike and Buffy characters just fit together so well in this story. I love it thank you for writing
person Jenn
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was a touching story. I really ejoyed it alot.
person Kimber
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was a nice ride.....the ups and downs keep us on our toes and rooting for the couple.....

Kimber
person era
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
h rea really liked the story it showed the good side of spike but kept the anger and forwarness
person Kimber
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm

So you have given Buffy hypertension....hmmmmm. If she gets red faced and short of breath just from being upset, then Spike is right she is not ready for sex yet....the excertion from the sex would be worse then with her being upset and could cause her to have a stroke......unfortunately most of the hypertension medications also decrease the sex drive in women and in men alot of times...LOL!

Man, that means no more babies......and I thought this couple who already had shit throw at them would find some happiness and make more babies......oh well....damn....

Can't wait to see what the doctor tells her......it is fanfiction so I guess anything is possible...but she has to tell him about how her pressure went up and she got red faced and short of breath with being upset at her husband that is a very important diagnostic symptom....and a question that should be asked at exam times......it indicates her body is not handling excertonal/emotional stress....and sex is both....LOL.

Kimber
person Ashley
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that your story is wonderful and so far it has been the best story I have ever read on here....I hope that the story ends up all right...please let everything be fine...
person txjmfan
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Geez! I've got tears rollin'! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
person Kimber
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OKAY

THIS had best NOT be the END! IF so you just ruined a great story......we didn't even get a name for the little tyke.....

This soooo is ittyitty cliffhanger and you'd better have the next part up very very soon or I'm sending the mean imps to your house and your life will be in constand disruption until you fix this..........sniff sniff......


Kimber
person Kimber
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW

That was a sweet chapter....now the next question is....was that the end?


Kimber