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for Trials and Restorations

by FaithB

person Anon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so didnt see that coming!! i mean,that cant be true!!!!!
but still,im really glad someone finally told buffy how she treated faith,and i really hope theyll get together again soon
person cristina
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooooooooooooo, uh oh. All I have to say is I KNEW IT! I knew there was something with Joyce, lol. And I knwo this is stupid but Faith was cheating on Buffy during their relationship as well....oh well, anyway I love the fic. It's really good! I am glad to see you have updated! Keep up all the great work!!!!!
person A
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it! i really loved this story and i cant wait to see how it ends. please keep updating.........
person ashley
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated, i hope you continue soon and i loved it
person RocCityMa
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, why'd u stop?? plz update, this story is mad good so far.
person toria
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i just finished readin all the chapters u've put up for this series and i really wanna know how it ends. please update soon.
person blu
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it more please
person wedlock424
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my, a whole new chapter! i'm totally psyched! keep 'em coming. i really like it that buffy and faith are getting along with each other nicely after everything that's happened but wouldn't it be interesting if buffy met delana? i'd love to see how buffy would react to seeing faith with someone else... anyway, i hope the next chapter is posted soon.
person allie
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when are buffy and faith going to get together again. and if they do pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hurry it up
person Calamity
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
=/ moving on is good too, i guess.... but it makes me so sad. =[ I know i said i liked Delana but come on, B/F fan speaking. soooo whats the dirt? Whats the deal with Kenn and D? hehe. [When you say that really fast it sounds like Kennedy. So not the point.] Seriously, i gotta know? Did our richie rich potential cheat on her wicca lover? Or is there some ugly dark secret in the little blonde's closet? Is it enough to jeopardize Faith's budding romance? Will Faith find a another job or is it back to the store for her? Will her jeep ever run again? These are the hard pressing question that deserve answers. And it is YOU, my friend who must provide these answers. It's your responsibility to the public. Sacred responsibilty even... Shouldnt be shunned. Consequences could be deadly. I so should not have coffee after 10. Anyway to sum up, i'm hooked, i love it, please continue.

P.S. I know he wasnt even in this chapter but i'd like to say again, for the record, I dont like Scott. I dont really think its him i'm not particularly fond of. Okay thats a lie. I dont like him but i like his relationship with Buffy even less. I mean really, what kind of marriage is that? Theres like this huge white elephant in the room and the worst part is that he cant even see the fucking thing because Buffy either A) doesn't feel comfortable enough to share all of herself with him; or B) doesn't believe he can handle her world. However you slice it though, the bottom line is Buffy doesnt trust him enough to tell him about herself and the world around them. Thats not a suffiecent basis for any relationship, least of all a marriage. If you look at it all of Buffy's lasting friendships somehow revolved around her being a Slayer. Because why? Because its who she is. A Slayer. Scott is married to a lie and he doesnt even know it. I'd almost feel sorry for the guy if you know... i didnt like totally dislike him. Finally, i'd like to say you've done a great job of introducing all these secondary characters that are so easily expendable. Scott, Delana, Guy. All them nice enough but with a sufficent amount of skeletons and questionable characteristics that the reader wouldnt be bothered if they... oh i dont know... disappeared.

Oh, last thing i promise, could Giles just do the right thing and call Faith. Buffy's got issues, i know, but she needs to be more responsible with her personal welfare she has a child to think about, again.