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That darned Angel! Why couldn't he just fall on a picket fence! Oh well, poor Kendra looks like she is going to bite the dust soon. I wonder how Buffy plans to get rid of Dru but still keep Spike. Good chapter!!

How will she get rid of Dru without Spike knowing it was her? Will she kill Kendra? More soon please.

I am so glad that you decided to update this fic! I love the evil Spuffiness. I am anxious to see what Buffy does in light of the new Angel situation and I wonder what Angel has told them. Hmm....

WTF is Buffy now? She is more than a slayer vampire and more than Amon. She is not killing her victims and did not want to kill Angel or Kendra. BTW, lots of nice Spuffy smut here. More please.

I really like this story so far...just wondering if you have a beta. There are some typos that spell check wouldn't catch.
And when you're writing fast, miss...Been there, done that.
Anywho, great job so far.
mell

hmmmm - i didn't know this was a WIP - it didn't indicate that. i'm way to impatient for wips!!

ok - this story has really good potential. i do not ever like to criticize a fanfic writer, because - hey! you're out there doing something.

but please - the grammar, punctuation and sentence structure in this story is just too distracting. could you find somebody to proof it for you? have you not printed it up and read it yourself? it's really disturbing to have to work so hard trying to understand what you are trying to say and putting in missing words, etc. if english is not your first language, could you find somebody to help you with this? cuz, it really has potential. i like stories where buffy is vamped.

so please - get some help with that technical aspect. i will even volunteer. i will have to keep my eye on this story - i'm sure there is a lot more of it to be told.

i love how this story is turning out. i love the powerful buffy. its awesome. i think she should challenge spike sometime. and nurture her inner demon. this is a great story line so far. i love how you have done it. i can't wait to see what she has in store for angel, and her plans for dru's ritual as well. maybe put a little sunday/buffy action in there. ;)

i love this story so far. i think faith should be called soon.....and then have her meet buffy. and then have faith/vamp buffy action going on. that'd be hawt.

This is a great story! Could you email me when it's updated?
Thanx Barb

Two great new chapters, thanks, love how Buffy is handling Jenny, good to have a spy on the inside, can't wait to see what you have planned for Buffy to do about the ritual.