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Great start. Looking forward to more.

Okay

Time for true love to prevale.....let the spuffy begin....and Riley go off into the wilds and find a himself....


Kimber

interesting start... though Im not quite sure about the story title... I mean, they will hit it off right? and when they do she'll probably still be married which means, well, at least for me, that she's the 'bad boy' in this story...
Hm, though Riley's a jerk so that makes her smart not bad...ok Im babblin
keep goin, I'm way curious

I really liked this! You have the right amount of dialogue and story, I usually don't like it when there're lots of paragraphs and no dialogue, but that's not your case, so I liked that; I also like that you took the time to give some format to the story, it makes for an easy read. I think the idea is really interesting, and the characters sound believable. I do think that in the future you're gonna have to beefuleful with the subject, 'cause it could get a little touchy with Buffy being married and all.
Storywise, I get the feeling that there's a reason for Riley being away so often, something that has nothing to do with his job, so I'll just wait and see what happens.
I also like that we got to see Dawn's reaction to Spike, and I love that he noticed and was nice to her.
I really hope you update soon, I can't wait to read more!
Keep up the good work! :)

Great start. No porn yet, but the story's intriguing.

What a wonderful beginning! Can't wait to read more.

Chris

This is goinna be hot...please continue soon!

Absolutely love this story already! So well written and lovely characters - really can't wait for more :)

More please!