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for The Bad Boy Next Door

by addielogan

person Emma
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and make Buffy break it off with Riley, he's an ass. I really loved that chapter, even though it was kind of angsty and sad. Anyway, keep the story coming, I really love it!
person Katrina
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was great to see another chapter so soon. Really enjoying this and still feeling sorry for Spike, bless him. Nicely written, looking forward to the next chapter :)
person spikedchick
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. But POOR William. The fact that Buffy seems to give him something but always with guilt or some other crap is definitely not what he deserves.
And Riley... grrr can I just say CREEP!!!
Anyways, please update soon... I'd love ead ead more!
person Fifi )(
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A enjoyable chapter, the love/smut scenes where good, there needs to be more emotional reasonce since they seem to falling in love. Give us more soon
person Katrina
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter but I feel SO sorry for Spike! Liked the parallel's with season six but I do hope it doesn't end up the same way - much prefer a Spuffy ending! And Riley HAS to cheating, doesn't he? Gormless nit! Can't wait for the next part :)
person Kimber
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm

Maybe Buffy had better wake up and smell reality.......Riley was an escape as her mother died.....Spike is her true love and she should stop killing what they have and move on and drop the first cheating spouse.......Riley who is get his his rocks off of with Sandy, if that is the only one he has been doing while on the so called job......still think he is a rat fink cheater.......LOL

Kimber
person Blazing Fire
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Personnally I loved it. I really thought about the episode in Season six called Wrecked. I feel sorry for Spike though. Buffy used him because she thought Riley was cheating her which he probably is. Hope to see more soon.
person Emma
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... that scene at Spike's house resembled a certain scene from season six, and I would like to advise you not to go down that path. I'll read it anyway, but it can get really depressing when Buffy uses Spike like that. Anyway, the chapter was very well written, and I would just like to say that I think Riley really is cheating on Buffy and just said that to make her think he wasn't. If he isn't cheating, then maybe be a little clearer about that...
person white rabbit
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! sooo good...keep updating at quick as possible...can't wait for more
person txjmfan
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just for the reconrd, I think Riley's lying through his pearly whites. Poor Spike! Used & abused even in AU!