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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please!
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh where oh where could the cheating Riley be, oh where oh where can he be......
hmmmmm, maybe he is caught up in a tree
hmmmmm, maybe his ship sunk into the sea
hmmmmm, maybe he is not and never to be
seen again by our lovely buffy......
LOL
God I need sleep....
Kimber
hmmmmm, maybe he is caught up in a tree
hmmmmm, maybe his ship sunk into the sea
hmmmmm, maybe he is not and never to be
seen again by our lovely buffy......
LOL
God I need sleep....
Kimber
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this!!! Please keep writing! I want lots of angst and romance and hopefully a big explosion from Riley... preferably one that isn't easy to resolve!!! AH! It's soooooooooo good!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off, I like your AU story telling. I don't mind a little angst as long as the writing is done well. I appreciate that you have kept the characters true to their original as it makes the story more believable. I think the parallels to the show are a great read. I appreciate plot because just mindless smu wel well, mindless!~
I hope you have chapter 6,7,8,9,10, etc up real soon!!!
I hope you have chapter 6,7,8,9,10, etc up real soon!!!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapters. Wonderful writing. Hate Spike being used, but that's just my own personal thing. I know it's true to the characters. Keeping the faith that all will turn out well. Can't wait to read more.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so beautiful and painful. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your characterization of Buffy and Spike. They guilt and the pleasure that she feels and the irony of it all to Spike. I am wondering if Spike is going to try and befreind Riley, and if he will catch on to Spike's attraction to Buffy.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm, I do get your point... a good romance novel/story isn't any good without a little angst... while I agree even when it comes to the show I still think the show went to far and I really hope you're not planin on doin that.
I like the story so far though sometimes I wish spike would just grab some random skank and fuck her three ways from sunday in front of Buffy.... not so much, But you get the point hehe
keep goin and update soon!
I like the story so far though sometimes I wish spike would just grab some random skank and fuck her three ways from sunday in front of Buffy.... not so much, But you get the point hehe
keep goin and update soon!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I agree with what you said about alluding to the actual show. And I'm enjoying the slower, unfluffy pace since there will be a happy ending. Anway, wonderful chapter, more please!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the story! The angst is killing me, but I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!