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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uhm... Yeah. One of their names, the female one, was Jinx.
Woohoo! Shame on Buffy!!! I hate Buffy. But I love the term "mind-fuck." I will now use that when-ever available.
Geeze, what's Dawn gonna say when she finds out? And I always thought that the show was wrong when they made her hate Faith in season seven. Logically Dawn should trust Faith. If Glory had killed Buffy they might have needed the second Slayer as the Key's protector. It's so simple. Anywho, I really like the portrayal of Faith's past. It's so obvious she was abused as a child (nearly every Faith writer mentions it in one way or another). Well done.
~Ciao.
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Woohoo! Shame on Buffy!!! I hate Buffy. But I love the term "mind-fuck." I will now use that when-ever available.
Geeze, what's Dawn gonna say when she finds out? And I always thought that the show was wrong when they made her hate Faith in season seven. Logically Dawn should trust Faith. If Glory had killed Buffy they might have needed the second Slayer as the Key's protector. It's so simple. Anywho, I really like the portrayal of Faith's past. It's so obvious she was abused as a child (nearly every Faith writer mentions it in one way or another). Well done.
~Ciao.
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One of Glory's minions is named Dreg, if that helps you at all. :) Love the story, can't wait for more. :D
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
looking good. I'm glad you touched on Faith not really fully iviniving Buffy. Meaning I think it was neat, the way that you wrote it, did it...am I making sense? I forget what the minions are called, sorry, can't help you out there. Anyway, hope you update soon! ;):)
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This one was sweet x)
Keep on! x)
Keep on! x)
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
!!!tops!!!
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
!!!great chapter!!!
liking the way it's coming along...
more when you can...
liking the way it's coming along...
more when you can...
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey good chap. poor faith. and buffy has gone psycho.
alf grf grammar mistakes. u should have a betta for it for example you kept writing threw instead of through. the threw u put it like u threw a stick. and when you shorten anya's name its Ahn. there were other things but thats what stuck mostly.
alf grf grammar mistakes. u should have a betta for it for example you kept writing threw instead of through. the threw u put it like u threw a stick. and when you shorten anya's name its Ahn. there were other things but thats what stuck mostly.
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Duuuuude... o.o
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July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i ws just on vacation as well. i like the storey, i see why you are doing somethings and I agree. I mean it is YOtorytory. Don't let anyone make you feel different and make you change the way your story is going. :) anyway, keep writing.
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow great fic, sorry I havent been able to post a review until now. I REALLY like how this fic deals with different issues then other fuffy fics do. Its really fun to be able to put characters into positions (not like that gutterminds) that they wouldnt normally be in and I think thats the main purpose in writing fanfic. I feel bad for poor buffy, its obvious something isnt right in that blonde head of hers. And poor Faith... :(
Hope that buffy sorts what shes going through and theres still a chance in the future for the two slayers to have a stable relationship. However which ever way you choose to take this fic, Im sure the ride will be great. Im really enjoying reading and I hope you update soon.
Hope that buffy sorts what shes going through and theres still a chance in the future for the two slayers to have a stable relationship. However which ever way you choose to take this fic, Im sure the ride will be great. Im really enjoying reading and I hope you update soon.