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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so funny and sexy altogether it's a great reading pleasure !
The way Buffy was explaining to William how to be more threatening on the phone was priceless.. And when she's reading the novel in the car : oh , yummy !
You captured so well their verbal sparring style , and i found them sweet and exciting when they were buying clothes , and later showering.. The u.s.t is growing , and I wonder who will be the fisrt to let go..?!
Talking about a kidnapper : William would win the golden medal for the most considerate guy , I think .
The way Buffy was explaining to William how to be more threatening on the phone was priceless.. And when she's reading the novel in the car : oh , yummy !
You captured so well their verbal sparring style , and i found them sweet and exciting when they were buying clothes , and later showering.. The u.s.t is growing , and I wonder who will be the fisrt to let go..?!
Talking about a kidnapper : William would win the golden medal for the most considerate guy , I think .
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story so far is really good. it has so much hot & steamy potential! i honestly can't wait for the next update. i love how you have written William and i think you can make this story a great one. please keep writing. update soon
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like where this is going...and I love the film which this story is based upon...
hope you'll update soon, and don't let us hanging for long
thx so much
hope you'll update soon, and don't let us hanging for long
thx so much
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like this story so far faith and willow should want buffy and spike thatd be hot!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah a new chapter! William is such a gentle soul it is almost geeky! :) Cute.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEah you updated! i like this story very much. please update again soon. :)
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like it so far. Interesting prem Ca Can't wait to see where it goes.
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Jen.
It's been a while since I got a little time to myself, so I've only just been able to come and review you, even though i read this a couple of days ago on LJ.
I think it's great. It's so realistic.
Sometimes, situations just get the better of you, and all you want is someone to blame. I feel like that right now, so this story is probably going to become my companion for a little while until things smoothen out in my world.
I'll let Spike deal with things the wrong way, while I just bite my tongue. You'll keep me from getting in trouble.
So...yeah...Spike is sexy...and I can't wait for Buffy to realise it.
xxx
(Kinky)Nicky
It's been a while since I got a little time to myself, so I've only just been able to come and review you, even though i read this a couple of days ago on LJ.
I think it's great. It's so realistic.
Sometimes, situations just get the better of you, and all you want is someone to blame. I feel like that right now, so this story is probably going to become my companion for a little while until things smoothen out in my world.
I'll let Spike deal with things the wrong way, while I just bite my tongue. You'll keep me from getting in trouble.
So...yeah...Spike is sexy...and I can't wait for Buffy to realise it.
xxx
(Kinky)Nicky
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jennifer
Great to see it posted, can't wait for the rest of the story.....LOL
Kimber
Great to see it posted, can't wait for the rest of the story.....LOL
Kimber
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot. There are a great many similarities to "A Life Less Ordinary", which is one of my fite ite movies. I didn't see that you had based it upon the movie, but if you didn't you should definately watch it.